Tower of Nightmare

A drawing I made of a mysterious tower Silverwing told me about when we played WoD Vampire last summer.
It's a 'creaky tower, with roots climbing up it's old stones, almost like fingers reacing for the top. As you approach, you get a sudden realization of despair and death in the air'.
Traditional drawing with normal pencil on paper.
(Sorry, still can't operate the scanner)

Constructive critic?